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    Mario 64

    Im underwater here...

    the bass chord at 30 sec before the silence was too high? maybe, doesnt matter. These drums are really powerful, the crashes in particular, they last forever haha. The strings could maybe use some more reverb. Nice little piano interlude, could have a little more action in the upperovtaves, sense it is the only instrument. Very full sounding, nice job!

    Gloudas responds:

    Glad you liked it! Good idea with the reverb on strings though, hadn't thought of that. Thanks for reviewing!

    yo this is insane

    I think the acoustic guitar came in too early, and some of the transitions were a little confusing in the middle. Mmm bells sound nice

    Everything else was flawless, this song is amazing!!!

    Ah...

    I had this really long review about how this song made me feel like I was on a lake, but newgrounds server fucked up when I tried to submit it....

    There was an old man with a straw hat on a fishing boat and mythical sea monsters that were actually kind of friendly, one even offered you a ride haha

    Alas, this song was very relaxing, the glitched out drum beats when the kit first came in could be cleaned up abit i guess, its the only thing that really threw me off. The piano sounded really nice :D

    Good Luck!

    Felt like i was on a world map

    for looping purposes, those two brass notes at the end should definatly be played by a string...nice job otherwise

    Zero123Music responds:

    ok, thanks for the suggestion. I will fix right away. :D

    Menu Loop

    Might be a more apropriate title then haha. Sucks that Im not listening to this on my speakers, I think the sub would sound nice, at leat I feel like this should be 10x more dark and deep. Th beat is simple, nice little break in it. The hats that come on the down beat, try putting them on the up beat with less velocity, it would make it sound more continious, and seeing as its a loop, thats something you should go for...

    But me likes

    LoneEagle responds:

    Hi RyeGuyHead, i haven't listened to this on my speakers either, i always wear the headphones nowadays. Thanks for your feedback it is really appreciated and I'm glad you enjoyed the loop.

    oooh

    me likes the bass alot. I would change the attck on the brass, its a little too slow, maybe bring it up in the upper eq too. Whats this orchestra part, wasn't expecting that haha.

    coMpLekS responds:

    yeah, the brass does sound a lil off now that you mention it. haha, yea i dunno about that orch part i just felt like switchin it up.

    I would have to agree...

    this track is pretty sick. I would put more in the fill at 11 sec, when there is silence, maybe take out a little in the synth part at the transitions aswell if you do master and re-upload. Just some suggestions...

    Very catchy anyways, nice job!
    5/5 9/10

    coMpLekS responds:

    Lol what up RGH. long time no talk. maybe i will end up doing something with it. preciate the input!

    Apropriatly titled

    The song is nice, didnt really build or pick up like i wanted it to. Mainly after the first minute and a half, I wanted that pulsating drum beat to get crazy and have a nice groove going. But its more chilled out, so it works. The synth lead was nice sounding, but really repetitive, but hey, thats commercial music, so good job.

    The piano interlude, was not expected but sounded great. Strings would sound escellent in that section. Drums should have changed slightly during the second half the song, more hats or something. The subtle synth in the left pan should be brought out more methinks, I missed on the first time around haha

    Keep doing your thing!

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