Lets do it!
I liked the synth beat, it was something very solid to build your song around. The drums could have been tweaked a little more. Throw some FX on them, adjust the frequency of your hi hats a little. There was some nice diversity in here, switching keys and waht not. The other synth, i guess it was the melody, it sounded like a square sound either way, might have been nice with a phaser.
The bell delay had too much feedback, sort of made it muddle together. Some open hi-hats on the 3rd beat would make this song funky, but its cool as it is.
Nice job man