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I dont know why this is a top 5....but ill review anyways... the bells were really annoying after about the thirs the time that you played the pattern over again. Youa re using fruity loops aren you? I know its tempting to just paste the patterns over and over again...but the difference between someone who is good, and someone who isn't is diversity and qaulity...(in my oppinnion) which you get neither of if you just repeat patterns over and over again on the playlist. The big bell wasnt the same pitchas the rest of the rest of the stuff. Meh...it could have been like 30 seconds shorter as well. The beginning was fine, for te most part. Dont take this badly
-Ryan

iheartmyteddybear responds:

You're right. This is the version I used only Fruity Loops on. I just wanted to see how the discerning listeners of NG would like the way it sounded before I worked on it more. As it is, however, I got impatient and have been working on the full version of the song since the day after I put this one up here. Thanks for the input.

Good

Im guessing you let out a lot of rage with your response to that review. I agree with you 100%. I gave what one might say as a "harsh" review to this guy who spammed all of his songs everyday. They were I think I might of said, " Ten seconds of shit". Anyways, I got an email from his girlfriend telling him to leave him alone or he will kick my ass or something, even though he lived in another country. Oh well, some people are just ignorant.
Now about this song. It was pretty festuve, and liked you said fairly repetitive too. I liked how the melody and backround fit so well together. the little bell sweep or whatever thing got pretty annoying after a while, I can tell you made the pattern and just put it across the whole playlist, which I have done several times. However it repeated so much it almost took away an elemnt from the song. On the good side, I could listen to this song for quite a while without getting bored. Good job!!
This is my way for maing up for the last hasty review

Its me again...wheres reason

You are getting much better. This one had much more of a beat o just jam too, and then all of a sudden random piano part. The bass I liked very much. How did you do the crescendo on the string, I have been looking for a way to do that nad teh fade out for quite some time. I have to run, but i did post another new song....go review

It was pretty......

The guitar parts were really pretty amazing, ver soulful. The flanger was a nice touch at first, bit it got a little annoying after a while. Was that a slight distortion guitar i heard in the backround, what was up with that? The solos were very nice, you should extend this song with more of lead guitar parts like that. Keep it up!

Very nice..

Keep doing what your doing

Khuskan responds:

*keeps doing it* :D

Horray for you

If this is an original you are one of my new favorites. I know what it feels like to make an orignal piece of music and have people apreciate it, I wonder why midi rips are so popular

Khuskan responds:

Tis indeed the origional. It was never exported as midi and was made in Cubasis VST using an evolution midi keyboard, so its 'tenicaly' midi in the manner the notes are played. I garuntee, and i can back up, All the tracks I make are 100% my own work.

That was so awsome

I really like this kind of music, it is cool how could you mix the sort of rap beat hard hit part with the soulflul laid back swing melody. This is really good stuff, I will look at your other stuff definatly

Amazing

It was a good song before the break, just lacked a little motion, and was alittle reptitive. The low timpani, and little snare roll was an excellent touch in my oppinion. The piano going down the scale was nice, but if you changed the top note around a bit it would have sounded a little bit nicer. The transition was very nice, although it was little bit short, I suggest you extend it. Good job

He needs to chill out

Blues can mean a lot of things. In this case it was just the mood of the song, not some technical chord structure and progression for soloing off of.
The song was slightly repetitive, but you did mix up the main melody enough to keep it intresting. I liked the drums, but the bass could have been improved slightly. Instead of playing the same note as the root position of the chord, you should have the bass go up and down the scale or create some harmony. THe song in general needs some more diversity...thats all.

Cool Song

You gave it a nice beat and changed some instruments.....but thats about it. You did the mood all together, which is the goal for a remix...well at least in my oppinion. There were some effects that i noticed...i think a reverb on the guitar. Overall this piece was repetitive, but im not really one to talk. One of the hihats or crashes sounded really out of place as well....

XBrav responds:

Yeah it's really a work in progress for OC ReMix. There will be a solo section in there somewhere however for Newgrounds it sounded too cool.

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