Not bad
it prepared to launch in the beginning...but then nothing happened. I thought that was a little odd. The new synth that came in was fine when it went solo, but the accompinament with the original synth was out of place...to say the least. It was a tad bit repetitive, but then again, its trance...so blah. Uhh I suppose it wasnt too bad. Just some generic trance to please the masses
Happy?
I dont really like this kind of music, but ill try to be constructive anyway. I thought the pad was fine in the beginning. The main synth was decent i suppose. It built very nicely into the trance-string pad melody part. But it was so repetitive that I couldnt really enjoy it, but i guess thats the way this genre of music is. The little add ons and fills were a nice touch...but didnt really keep me from lossing intrest
Another? sure....
woah...all your songs sound the same. Its not bad, you just have a knack for quality orchestrated songs i guess. This one a lot more repetitive than your others. A french horn melody over the top of the strings would have sounded nice, and im pretty sure would have kept with the mood already established. I think you should start giving these songs to your orchestra teacher at your school, because you got some quality stuff. Keep on doing your thing.
Its true, I really like orchestral.
Well, the original plan was making a couple of more then start with metal, but it seems that this way they kinda get good response :)
Anyways, i made this song a LONG time before submitting it so i really didnt expect it to get a good score :)
Yeah, ive actually been considering it when my teacher always say "NONE OF YOU MORONS CAN MAKE AN ORCHESTRAL"
...bloody skunk guy.
anyways, Thank you for reviewing :)
Constructive Critisism
There was absolutly nothing wrong with the beginning. I think you could have introduced a pizzicato string to layer with the bottom part after the nice little build you had. I havent checked out your other songs, but this one and march of the dammed seemed ot have the exact same drum beat. The choir got a little "out there" at some points. I wouldn't really make the choir do any short sounds, particualry if you don't have a quality soundfont. The choir really sounded find until you stopped the whole notes that it was playing. Also the little choir part in the end seemed like it was off beat in an unintentional way at some points. This sounds like it would fit perfectly into a video game. Honestly...this song was flawless until the end...which really threw me, beacause it qwas so professional until that point. Good job
Yeah, Not really many liked the choir.
I love this review, gives me a general impression of what is bad, and good.
You also seemed honest, but i dont think it deserve the 9 when listening to it now.
And the choir was never edited before submitted, so i dearly regret that.
Thank you for reviewing :)
On these songs with not that many i love getting feedback
Wha?????
hmmm. nice theme. Everything was put together very nicely...too nicely. I think that the origianl horn part could have been a little more intense, but the accompainment made it cool
Thanks for the great review! ^_^
I wanted the horn to be a little sutle in the beginning, to add the sence of the music playing from a distance--like the flute part after the opening sequence. (I know, I'm crazy! XP) Don't worry, the next part will be intense! (and majestical, too!)
Ryan likes
Its funny you say that...cuz most people dont listen longer than ten seconds...I for one, do...for the most part. This was quality. I could very easily see some stupid nes rpg having this as its theme. That doesn't mean Im saying your song is stupid...a good rpg good have this as its theme too. Good job...horray for you!
hey, thanks for the review! not only do you listen longer than ten seconds, but you ACTUALLY REVIEW hahaha. the reason i say "please listen longer than just ten seconds" is because the beginning is supposed to sound boring and monotonic and most people would just listen to that and then turn it off. i'm glad you liked the song!
if you have the time, please rate/review my other pieces. thank you! cheers an g'day.
-Ted Johnston
Sweet
Finally....I just reviewed like twelve awful songs.....thank you. The piano in the begining was quite nice. I dont know why, but I think it may have sounded better an octave higher. That pitch was a little too low for a beginning melody. The whole little piano buildup was pretty nice. When it stopped...I wanted more of something, Im not quite sure of what though. It did pick up quite nice, actually very nicely. But god damn, I want the piano higher. Maybe you could keep the low piano part, but add another melody layering over top of it when it "picks up"...that would be swell. Good song though...
i went on FL and i put the piano an octave higher....it actually sounds really good.
Thanx for your review man.
Work on it
HAHAHAHA....ha. That was some serious shit.... The synth, in al honesty, wasnt half bad. The beats were uhh questionable though
bad...but ok for a beginner..if thats what you are
...it was not that good? I can tell right now that you are not using piano roll, atart doing that. The string got old after being held down for like 20 measures. The little riff you had wasnt bad. But it would have helped a lot if you expanded on it, instead of just playing it over...andover...and over again. ok
I wish I had friends as well..
This does make me feel alone. But it also makes me want to get up and start dancing. And you know that dancing alone can lead to bad things. Anyways...this ong started pretty cool, I liked the pads a lot. Once they sort of faded out, it turned into generic techno-trance-blah. I suppose it was good, it was just so generic I couldnt really get into it. I can't really point anything out for change, except maybe change up the melody once in the song, yeah that would eb nice. that was a trippy little fade out though
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