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No but seriously,

I dont want to do this project if its going to be generic techno-dance. Just thought id throw that out there. Its not a bad song, and everyone will be able to build on the song pretty easily. Good start

TheComet responds:

rye, this is a very generic and basic sounding song since what I want people to do is take this and turn it into their own song with their own style and genre. I made this like this just to act as a starter to the project, because making a complex starter would probably be a bit of a deterrent for new people (based on past performance/failures lol)

i get the god damn picture

i will take a bong hit after this, jesus christ. The beat wasnt bad, but the "just smoke" was girly and annoying. The strings sort of sucked too. Improve damnit

KAMZA responds:

dude
i liked it
if you didnt dont coment keep it simple with
"It wasnt Bad"
Fuck up

God damn, I love genos theme

He is the coolest rpg character ever. However, the drums really took away a lot from the song. Try using soundftons or something for the drums. Even if your song is primarily synth, some real sounding drums are nice. THe bells droned out the theme once it started up. The lead synth was pretty much perfect for this song though, good job

Its very nice

The bells get a little too repetive, I would have gotten rid after a while, or justy have htme play the bassline, like you did. The drums are not loud enough, and they need more hi hat. But it is nice, and if you keep working, I can see you getting very good at what you do

Flashburn responds:

Hey thanks I appreciate your constructive review, and I will take your words seriously when I work on my next song

im sure you know alot about music

So therefore you know that this sucks, and i dont have to go in full detail about it...Word of advice, try using the piano roll....it works in mysterious ways

i feel bad for you

top 5 and no reviews. This song was pleasant to listen to. the main synth was too basic...i think you would have been better off having the short synth act as a bass and throw another melody overtop the song. The plucked pattern you used was pretty nice. Not a bad song at all. Bottom line, basic but nice

fillall responds:

hah, well... thanks for the review. Just to tell you, almost all the songs that i have submitted, i made over two months ago. And i just thought id submit them into newgrounds. I really dont see how my song hit the top five, but it happened. So cool. i have to start submitting new stuff, which i will very soon. So again, thank you for the review. Oh, and your music rocks.

~fillall~

hey...i live like close to you

this song was very basic...but i take it your just starting out on fruity loops, so its expected. This actually sounded vetry familiar to my first songs. You should have added more instruments...many more. Adding a string and a bass wouldnt eb tough, but it would make it much better. Keep working...you might get as good as me

easy

Hells Bells, ACDC

I tend to stay more toward the instrumental rock

But I must say this kicks ass. This is all you? You layered well. I dont know enough about guitar to critique any of your riffs and whatnot, however i do plan on learning. Towards the end you had a little too much going on...when the double bass goes off. It got just a little choppy. The solo really wasnt loud enough. as far as i can tell, it was good, you should crank it up. It ended a little abruptly. I would have faded out the solo or just closed it off better

GoreBastard responds:

Thanks mate! Yeah, it's all me and my drum program. I always have a problem getting the solo's at the right level. It's something I should work on, but I focus more on the background music more than the solo's.

Anyway, cheers for the review mate.

I must say that has happened to me too

Very crazy.....i would critique it instrument by instrument, but i have no idea whats going on. Nice effects with the delay. I would probably cut out the gritty hit type thing when the drums arent going...it sounds fine all together, but alone its....strange.

AdmiralConquistador responds:

lol, is it really that crazy? And no! I like the gritty hit type thing! poo on you Mr. Head

-ac-

P.S. the 4 year old in me got the best of me there. Forgiveness, please.

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